My observation

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mnMXZHA1dIw&feature=share&list=UU8cI4CxTkcpZQuUnsWxVhPw

PRESENTATION - Did you use any resources? No, Yes I used some resources. - Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, the resources were relevant and atractive


BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT - Did you look at your audience most of the time?Yes, Because sometimes was nervous - Did you read from your notes?In general I didn't read. - Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? No, I didn't try to make any gestures or movements but was very nervous

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?
 Yes, when I did the writing of my presentation, first I did a brain storming
and then I organized my ideas.
 -Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? No, because I think that they do it more didn't clear.
 CONTENT
 Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?
 Yes, I think so. -
 Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?
 No, I didn't because this presentation it was about our summer holidays. was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original?
Well, I think that it wasn't detailed.

PRONUNCIATION and  LANGUAGE
 - Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order) Yes, I did.
- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?No, I didn't use the dictionary. (synonyms, new words, expressions..)
- Did you use sentence linkers?(and, but, moreover, also, furthermore, although,however..)Yes, I tried to used sentence linkers.
- Did you use fillers?(well, you know, for example, one second..)Yes, because you cant' do the presentation .
 PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION -
Did you know how to pronounce all your words?Yes, I did.
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No, I didn't. -
 Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? I speed in a fluid continuum but I didn't change a tone of voice
-Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?Yes, during the presentation I think that I changed my tone.